EQ wrote:Khitan 告訴你 'There is some message he wanna send to Green Dragons.'.
這句不知道怎麼改好...There is 為描述單數或不可數名詞, 但是後面接了some..
但是message為可數名詞...所以整句應該是There are some messages .. 或是There is a message ...
The Gryphon說 'Very Well !'.
這..就我印象中似乎沒有Very Well的用法?
well為副詞..用途為形容動詞..但是這裡沒有動詞..應該只能用形容詞good之類的..
請各位有研究的先進指導一下@@
The Green Dragon Princess說 'Please bring an eye of crocodile for my father, he need it to cast a great spell...'.
後面那句應該是.. he "needs" it to cast ....或是 he will need it to cast ...
You remember that Green Dragon King needs the eye of a crocodile.
Then you starts to get the eye out.
第二句應是 Then you "start" to get ....
Cabe說 'It worth a try to decode this.'.
這句應該少了be動詞.. It is worth a try .... 才對

hi~~英文不是我的母語,所以我可能也有錯的地方,不過我也想發表一下我的看法:D
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Khitan 告訴你 'There is some message he wanna send to Green Dragons.'.
there is some message在文法上可以是對的.
如果there is some message 中的some指的是"某些東西",也就是說整句話的意思是說"他有某些訊息想要傳達給綠龍們" 那這個時候some就可以當作用在單數名詞(如message)上的形容詞.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/some
在以上網站(dictionary.com)找到對於some的解釋:
Dictionary.com Unabridged (v 1.1) :
1.being an undetermined or unspecified one: Some person may object.
American Heritage Dictionary :
4.Unknown or unspecified by name: Some man called.
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如果它要表達的句意我沒猜錯的話,well done會比較好, very well在口語上是表達同意對方的要求.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/very%20well
在以上連結找到的,對於very well的解釋:
wordnet:
an expression of agreement normally occurring at the beginning of a sentence
American Heritage Dictionary of Idioms:
All right, I agree to, as in Will you take her hand?Very well, but only to cross the street. Also see all very well.
就這樣 有錯歡迎指正^^;;
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